"I've come to the conclusion that if I had to pick one website, I would pick The Burning House. By the title, I'm sure you could guess what the website is about.These people submit a picture of the items they would carry with them, along with a list, their name, and where they're from. Most of these people claim that they would take their cameras, phones, some old vintage clothes or sunglasses, or their laptops. Personally, if I posted on this website, my dog, phone, and blanket and probably a few good books would be in the picture. When someone asks another person what they would bring, the normal answer is "my phone, computer, camera, clothes, etc." But if you put some thought into this, your answer may be different. I'd bring what is most important to me, like I said earlier, my dog. He'd be the first thing I'd try to save(:"
In this post the person gives great thought about the topic they have chosen. The analytical side of this post, however is not the best. This person wrote about their ideas and what they thought the average person would bring with them in the case that their house was burning down. To better analyze this topic the author should have put more inferences and descriptions as to why people bring what they do in the case of a fire filled house. Maybe even describe the feelings of a person in that situation. They have a great main idea just not enough description or inferences.
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